notion v.
not all of the world
is corrupt
and of lies,
and in some of us
there might still be
some good.
cause it’s
only us
that can do
anything about
this.
08.18.2005.
notion vi.
2b
what we
r,
get 2 run
w/ da (child)ren,
get 2 run
as (chil)dren.
child run.
ch(eye)ld run.
chill dr., and
go 2 sleep.
08.18.2005.
UP!::urban po'E.Tree(s) 
like ur style with simple yet intriguing play with words…wud appreciate ur time*thoughts on my poems too wen ever u get a chance…good wishes…keep posting*reading….:-) 🙂
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notion v. really reminds me of the beauty that poets shine. so wonderful!
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Really liked the playful usage of word “children” in different ways.
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that’s what I’m talkin’ bout, uhuh, uhuh awesome!
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v -vi, is also a good chord progression, could be v7 – vi, like!
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