cause what the fuck is going on,
and how do i explain it in
a song?
i don’t promote conspiracy theories,
but it’s hard imagining
that this is all mere coincidence-
an unfortunate accident
or even intelligent design.
how scientists explain the mind,
and how we’ve understood space and time,
i am of those folks that will never march in line.
some of us gotta move our feet to the beat
of our own
heart/imagination.
i was once a child, and they tried to
take mine;
erase or fade any memory
of the innocence of childhood-
the loss of memory and the loss of innocence
of childhood.
i don’t promote conspiracy theories,
but it’s hard to comprehend how this is happening.
this is not my country.
this is not my nation.
this is just how we promote isolation.
and this is where we’re from,
and this is where we’re from,
and this is where you’re from.
this is where i’m from.
i am just the saddest song
sung to the happiest melody.
irony? sarcasm?
“i am just that song that don’t know it don’t belong.”
and this is where…
does the future ever make you feel trapped?
05.22.13.
I love this, the rhythm is fantastic. Love your stuff.
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Thank you so much.
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The love the rhyme scheme! Great thoughts!
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Find your melody and march to your own tempo is what I take from this poem;
Great job!
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I’d love to see how you interpret this
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I know what you mean, this place doesn’t like me very much either. I am just holding my own in my own private place though.
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Enjoyed the verse and the questions. I think the future is a given, it’s the present that need our attention. Thank you for being a poetry supporter!
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certainly a rhythmic poem! 😉
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love it. ever hear of the theory of inverse intelligence? The more heads a creature has, the dumber it is. It doesn’t mean much until you apply it to conspiracies: most conspiracies collapse under the weight of the stupidity of their individual members.
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It must take a special talent to interweave the music with the words, and you do it with style! I’m sooo impressed.
I’ll take this opportunity to thank you for your faithfulness in reading and commenting on my work. It’s very gratifying and appreciated!
Ron — Haiku Odyssey.com
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Yeah – great. It’s good to read something which has gravity.
Best wishes
opher
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