same nights.
we’re just trying to ride
the breath of the night;
the energy why
our dreams are divine,
and everything’s here.
everything’s here
inside of this moment,
and if you could just hold it,
then you would notice.
10.25.14.
we’re just trying to ride
the breath of the night;
the energy why
our dreams are divine,
and everything’s here.
everything’s here
inside of this moment,
and if you could just hold it,
then you would notice.
10.25.14.
Short crisp with a deep message.
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The meaning behind this, is we the people live in our minds and say things that don’t need to be said. However, that is why we the people say “you have burn to many bridges.”Meanwhile, I think you saying on the bottom has nothing to do with the quote.
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Poetry’s ability to make abstraction concrete, perhaps? Will follow. Glad you liked my post https://davekingsbury.wordpress.com/2016/06/08/renga-2/
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I really really really like this poem!
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This is deep and thought provoking. I have been reading some of your poems and must admit that your style of writing is so different from what I have read in the past. I’m glad to have stumbled upon your blog this morning, looking forward to reading more of your posts. ☺
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