untitled.
when i was a young boy,
and i thought i’d live forever,
i thought the days went by so slow.
but now it seems, the days and years
won’t stop passing me by.
all i know is that i
don’t want to die,
and it’s not like I want to
live forever,
but i just don’t want to think about being gone
because all i know is that i’m not done.
yes, i know, it’s dumb
to be afraid
of things we cannot stop,
so i just go on. i just go on
and on and on and on
and off.
05.12.14.
I think you’d like Julian Barnes’ ‘the sense of an ending’ he expresses the ideas of perception of time and age really beautifully.
I think the fear you have described is at the essence of all fears that we identify as other more superficial things in an attempt to avoid thinking of the end.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your economic use of words is strikingly beautiful – it captures a view of the fluid topic of mortality in a frighteningly poignant way. Thank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I really like how you ended this, it really brings home the the point and circles the poem back around to the beginning without repeating phrases.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
LikeLiked by 1 person
The last 2 lines is the same title of one of my poems. And I so love your writing. Hoping more poems to read fromthis blog 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person