passive voice.
And as the whole universe went into a blur, so as to reflect the chaos that surrounds, some hearts are not meant to be held down by earthly concerns. Reality is an ambiguous and subjective concern. Some of us are still aching for a return to our innocence, whence we were still much more pure, or I guess, purer. And yet still some of us lack concern for the remnants of the ashes on the ground from when we were much more alive.
10.23.12.
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An interesting piece.
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I think the sentiment is powerful. There are some small changes that might increase this power and I urge you to keep reviewing the form.
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It’s exquisite!
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I like it a lot !
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Thanks for checking out WordSisters!
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Your words affected me deeply. I interpreted them in my own way: news takes away our innocence and forces opinions and guilt upon us. So many are suffering in our world, yet we speak in a passive, rather than an active, voice. I pray for peace for the peaceful. Keep on writing.
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Returning to a time we thought we had. Loved this piece.
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Awesome!
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“Reality is an ambiguous and subjective concern.” I totally agree!
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Loved it! I really like your writing style.
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Thank you so much.
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I feel it.
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Reblogged this on just another daily contemplation and commented:
An inspirational blog from Mr. Frausto, I also found his website (mrfraustoclassroom) as very 22x interestingly attractive in deciphering the creative brain! Thank you Mr. Frausto! Truly a pleasant visit here.
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Hi Frausto. Thank you for liking my poem Reported! Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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Thank you for liking “Nature’s Therapy”. I notice that we talk about purity in our poems. I like that.
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