big bang theory.
winter whispers why weeping widows wander
in somber states during her solstice.
and nature replies,
“tis gloomed and clouded days to blame,
which have a tendency to lead towards sleep.”
and night awakens to be reminded
that everyday looks just like last week.
winter wanders off,
“all life must die to be reborn,
the earth as well, needs her rest
but if all i get are tears,
wretched whimpers,
well then rename me, the solstice of sadness.”
winter wandered
off into the mountains past over zarathustra.
a flash of hot air covered
like a blanket
as cold escaped
like a final breath from the atmosphere.
oceans began to dry and much of the continents
were now mostly desert.
everyone, wondered where winter was?
the earth felt her pulse weaken,
a sigh of lament across the universe.
this is the way the world ends. this is the way
the world ends.
not with a bang. not with a bang,
but with a whimper for
wild winter wandering.
11.06.02.
fine fine writing
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Thank you so very much.
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Great stuff, Frausto.
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alliteration, paradox, great words… splendidly awoke the pit of my nonchalant hypothalamus
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Now One of my favorite poems, ever!!! So insightful!!!!!!!
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Wow awesome ! Thank you so much. Glad you have enjoyed.
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I like how you included “not with a bang but a whimper.”
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T S Eliot would be pleased…
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This is beautiful, what an ending to the poem
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Truly a painter of words. All I can say is Wow! just Wow!
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Thank you so much. Your words are very kind.
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Like your poems, love the way you “paint” with words.
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fantastic poem. the first stanza was beautifully written.
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Insightful. And thanks for always stopping by.
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This is really amazingly done! Great writing.
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Indeed…
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Love minds that can conceive of Big Bang AND accept it! Thanks for stopping by my blog. Love your works.
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it start wi bang, end wi winter. so much for global warmn.
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Ha ha. I love how comical (but sad) it is, the people of the world lament at the exit of winter, and that being the cause of the end of the world. Ironic.
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Very effective piece. Well done !
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Echoing all the above! Lovely poem.
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LOVE IT MAN. the cycle of change
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well done.
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I am fond of alliteration. 🙂
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Phenomenal!
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wow, man, that moved me.
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Thank you so much, that’s very nice of you to say so.
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Wow, I never would have thought about the world and nature in that way. What a creative poem that is beautifully done!
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Thank you.
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Very nice piece. Keep it up. Looking forward to reading more like this.
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Thank you so very much.
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Promising. Write every day. Read every day.
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